After talking to my tutors about my first illustration board I realized that it wasn't strong enough and was given the advise to look at the proportions and try working with paper. So this time I have used various types of paper in my colour palette and arranged them in strips to show the pin-tuck. I have used tissue paper to represent the transparent fabric that the side pieces were made out of and I have cut out and layered the different shapes up to create the draping of the side pieces.
I feel that the style of my illustration shows the contrast of simpleness and layering that my design itself has. I hope that this illustration is strong enough and can help to achieve the grade that I want.